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The Objective Review

That was the title that greeted anyone who entered the review website of one Robert Hale. That, and a shallow sense of emptiness as you were welcomed with pages and pages of dense text on all sorts of media from television to music to whatever sort of noise the kids were playing when they had an uncomfortable amount of time on their hands. The webpage was void of any sort of colour, and only seemed to make up for it in organisation, with subcategories being categorised seemingly by how many categories they could possibly fall under. In turn, each review would then go on to list all the facts in regards to the media, without any sort of subjective input from the writer. For lack of a better word, the page was dull, and it would be an arduous task to locate anyone who achieved genuine enjoyment from it.

One man who did gain enjoyment from it, however, was its creator. Robert Hale was a man who echoed the sensibilities of his creation, in that he too would be considered rather dull. He created the page out of a sense of personal pride, knowing that he could review work without any sort of personal bias. This made him rather irritable on the idea of subjectivity. He always hesitated to call himself an objectivist because he felt that would be a subjective classification of his self. Nevertheless, he felt proud of his work, and his pride only bolstered when it grew its own fanbase. 80 percent of said fanbase thought he was being ironic. The remaining 20 percent dearly hoped he was being ironic. However, Robert Hale was never a fan of irony and was proud of his work.

And Robert Hale was content.

 

However, one day something happened that would change all that. It all started when Robert woke up to the smell of smoke and burning. Rather certain that he had not placed any bacon or eggs on the cooker prior to this, he rubbed his eyes open and was greeted by the sight of his bedroom in flames. He would have grown frantic at this sight, however he remembered seeing the words ‘Don’t Panic!’ on the cover of a book once, and decided the best course of action would be to search for the source of the fire. Apparently, his laptop had overheated with the media he had left running on it for future reviews, making the battery explode and setting fire to his desk. Neither a fan of household fires nor irony, Robert gave an annoyed sigh, ducked down, and began crawling his way to the exit.

Eventually Robert finally made his way out of the house, where he then proceeded to collapse on the ground. This was followed by a regular, cyclic procedure of coughing for air and gazing at his plain white house, now set ablaze and charred an unusual black that he felt to be rather unsightly. Cough. Gaze. Cough. Gaze. Cough. Sigh. Cough. Gaze.

After he felt he’d had enough of coughing and gazing, he decided he would just lie down outside his burning home. He decided against walking up to the nearest phone booth to call the fire department, as it was rather cold outside this night, and he admittedly felt rather cosy outside the grand fireplace that was his house. And it was in this moment, as he was taking in the warm embrace of the nearby inferno, that Robert Hale came to the realisation that he, in fact, wanted to watch his house burn down. He looked up at flames escaping his windows and he saw colours. Yellows and ambers and reds where his clean, white house used to lie.

But especially the reds, for at this moment in time, Robert saw red.

He saw red, and remembered the strawberries that were crushed for the jam sandwiches he loved as a child.

He saw red, and recalled the first time he’d ever felt true affection for someone who he didn’t know in relation.

He saw red, and reminded himself of what he felt when his first review received its first rejections.

He saw red as he watched his house burn to ashes.

And Robert Hale was happy.

The Objective Review
So lately I've been trying to experiment in order to shake things up a little bit. Trying styles I'm unfamiliar with, personas I'm unused to etc.
This is one of these experiments.

I wanted to do something around the length of a considerably large piece of flash fiction ~1000 words
But I wanted to see if I could try a rather different style of tragicomedy with it.

It may be great.
It may be horrible.

Either way, I'm just happy to be putting out stuff again. :)

Let me know what you think. I'm a pretty big fan of constructive criticism, so let me know what you feel I could do to improve. I'm pretty new to this sort of style too, so I know there's plenty that could be provided.

I hope to keep things coming.
Enjoy!

The Objective Review © 2014 Daniel Kuburoglu
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Top 100 Albums - 14/11/14 Edition by Shuriken95
Top 100 Albums - 14/11/14 Edition
So chances are if you know me, you know I love my music. I spend an unhealthily large amount of time checking out music releases from all across the spectrum, and as such I tend to find myself making lists of my favourites.

So every now and then, I like to go all the way and list my 100 favourite albums of all time. And since I find my tastes changing around so often, this is a list that is always shifting, so I tend to update it about every 6 months.

So yeah, here's my list from but a few weeks back. The Top 10 and Second-Tier albums are all listed individually and can be counted down in order. However since there were so many in other favourites that I saw as being on the same level, those can basically be arranged in any order.

If you want to make a list similar to this, then I'd recommend using Topsters. That's basically what I did. :)

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FINALLY, if you want to ask about absolutely ANY of these albums, all you need to do is ask. I love talking about these releases, so it's absolutely no problem for me to give a few words as to what can be enjoyed from them. :D
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Perhaps one of the most talked-about bands in the progressive rock / metal scene, Opeth recently took a rather large step in a different direction with their 2011 release Heritage, which was met with rather mixed response. 3 years have passed since then, and Opeth have once again returned to the spotlight with Pale Communion - an album that manages to address almost all of the issues held against its predecessor, though still maintaining a few problems of its own.

 

If you ever ask a well-informed metal fan to talk about Opeth, then you better get ready for a mouthful. Ever since the mid-to-late 90s, the band has become increasingly well known for releasing some of the best material to ever hit the scene, with albums such as Still Life, Blackwater Park, and Ghost Reveries being commonly placed among the top metal albums of all time. This being said, they recently stirred up a lot of controversy within music circles due to their rather noticeable shift in style on 2011’s Heritage. Fans of the highly-acclaimed progressive death metal group were now being treated to Opeth’s take on 70s progressive rock, and this stylistic shift to a much softer, ethereal sound caught many off guard and split opinions on the work heavily.

It seems, however, that Opeth have taken many of the criticisms held against Heritage to heart, because Pale Communion addresses a lot of them in stride. Most importantly, the band has managed to execute their newer, more delicate style with much more coherence than their previous work. The sound they created with Heritage has been taken and used as a foundation on which they have now crafted a far more tactile and recognisable identity. Tracks like the opener ‘Eternal Rains Will Come’ carry a signature sound to them that, while different from their previous works, is undeniably “Opeth-ian”. They maintain that vintage flair of 70s prog rock that the band seems to love, yet also bring a rather full and emotive production to the table (courtesy of Steven Wilson) which manages to add a modern flair to the music, as well as enhancing the ominous intensity of the work, a feature that seems to be Opeth’s bread and butter, no matter what style they perform in.

Pale Communion also happens to be one of Opeth’s more unique releases, with the group adding a good number of different songwriting and performance features that not many would have expected from the ominous proggers. For example, this is the first time fans really hear vocalist Mikael Åkerfeldt trying to go “all the way” with the clean side of his voice, pulling off highs that few saw coming. This being said, whether or not they really work is debatable; at times it feels like Åkerfeldt is straining his voice far more than he should, making these moments feel rather forced and inorganic.

However, the biggest and most noticeable difference noted throughout Pale Communion, from both a songwriting, performance and production standpoint is the emphasis placed on the drumming of Martin “Axe” Axenrot. Simply put, if this album was a mosaic, the drumming would be the golden centrepiece that shone gloriously in the sun. Whether it be backing the heavier riffs of ‘Cusp of Eternity’, the jazzier interludes of ‘Goblin’ or the moody and melancholic strings of ‘Voice of Treason’ and ‘Faith in Others’, the drums breathe life into every essence of Pale Communion.

Still, for every little detail that Opeth’s latest release gets right, it suffers from one crippling fault – its lack of remarkability. While almost every track could easily be considered “good”, there’s very little that happens throughout the 50+ minutes that this album runs which will really stun or impress listeners. The only example throughout the whole collection of songs that ever seemed to invoke this feeling came at the end of ‘Voice of Treason’, with Åkerfeldt’s vocals soaring over an incredibly grandiose combination of the entire band performing alongside a full string orchestra, singing “Have you ever had the feeling of a sorrow inside?” and making this track easily the best on the album. However, unfortunately, every other track seems to range from “pretty good” to “mediocre”, a feature most noticeable on the track ‘Cusp of Eternity’, which feels like it was written using the guidelines from the Metal 101 handbook.

Conclusion

Pale Communion
easily improves upon the new sound offered up by Opeth over their latest releases. The band feels much more comfortable and in control of what they’re doing, while still remaining unafraid to take risks. However, at the same time, this sense of comfort also seems to stem a little too much into the core songwriting, leading to a lot of songs being rather unremarkable and unmemorable, easily hampering the experience of any music listener looking for something “more”. A pretty good album, but hardly a shocker.


Eternal Rains Will Come - 8/10 (A promising demonstration of Opeth's newer prog style)
Cusp of Eternity - 3-4/10 (Astonishingly bland)
Moon Above, Sun Below - 6-7/10 (A pleasant experience that shows off the band's full sound, though rather unremarkable for a song its size)
Elysian Woes - 6/10 (Contains that Opethian melancholy, but does little with it)
Goblin - 8/10 (A surprising instrumental from Opeth. The drumming makes this track special. Solidly done.)
River - 7/10 (Odd to hear Opeth start a song on a major chord. Good stuff)
Voice of Treason - 9/10 (The strongest track on the album. Great build for an incredibly satisfying conclusion)
Faith In Others - 8/10 (A beautifully mournful conclusion to the album, brought to life by the backing string orchestra)


Production: 8/10
Performance: 8/10
Songwriting: 6/10
Originality: 7/10


Pale Communion by Shuriken95


Overall Score: 73%






Music Review: Opeth - Pale Communion
Opeth continue on their journey into their new style, continuing to split opinions in the process.
So let's see what Pale Communion has to offer.

Note: This review was actually previously published by The Boar, but I thought I'd bring it here as well, so that I could also add my little bits at the end. They had quite a strict style going, so you may notice that this review is rather different to my usual ones. That being said, I enjoyed taking this rather different approach to writing this, and definitely considered it a fun little experiment. :)

Check out the original here if you like some fancier editing; the crew at The Boar are a great bunch and I'm definitely gonna write more there. :) theboar.org/2014/11/06/pale-co…

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Really hope you all enjoy this review, because I enjoy making them. :)
If you have a request for a review of an album or a video game (or even a TV show; I'm willing to experiment) just let me know.

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Opeth - Pale Communion © Opeth & Roadrunner Records
Those wanting to give it a listen can stream it here: prog.teamrock.com/news/2014-08…
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Over the last year or two, I've had a lot going on in my life, and as a result, my creative output has suffered drastically.

Be it extreme procrastination, mental blocks that I still fail to shake off to this day or the simple concept of self-doubt, I've let too much get in the way of what I once loved doing, and what I've hoped to look forward to doing yet again.

I'm coming back, or at least, I dearly hope that I am coming back. Be it my creative work, poetry or prose, my reviews or anything else that finds its way back into the sunken caverns of my mind, I'm going to try and bring my productivity back up to a standard where I can feel happy about myself again. I'm tired of constantly looking back at my past works and feeling sorry for what I am compared to what I once was.

I want to make a change in my life, and I'm hoping that this is one of the steps I'll take in making it.

Expect content from me. I don't know when it will come, or what it will be, but I just know that I need to be reminded of why I did this in the first place. I need to find the spark again, because I know that I still possess the passion at the roots of it all.

I haven't spoken with many of you in months; with most of you, perhaps even longer.
So I hope that I'll be able to once again. :)

(something something about a phoenix cliche)

Many thanks to those who have stuck with me, and who still pay attention to what I do.
Here's hoping I can live up to your expectations again.

Daniel

  • Mood: Hope
  • Listening to: Bent Knee - Shiny Eyed Babies
Over the last year or two, I've had a lot going on in my life, and as a result, my creative output has suffered drastically.

Be it extreme procrastination, mental blocks that I still fail to shake off to this day or the simple concept of self-doubt, I've let too much get in the way of what I once loved doing, and what I've hoped to look forward to doing yet again.

I'm coming back, or at least, I dearly hope that I am coming back. Be it my creative work, poetry or prose, my reviews or anything else that finds its way back into the sunken caverns of my mind, I'm going to try and bring my productivity back up to a standard where I can feel happy about myself again. I'm tired of constantly looking back at my past works and feeling sorry for what I am compared to what I once was.

I want to make a change in my life, and I'm hoping that this is one of the steps I'll take in making it.

Expect content from me. I don't know when it will come, or what it will be, but I just know that I need to be reminded of why I did this in the first place. I need to find the spark again, because I know that I still possess the passion at the roots of it all.

I haven't spoken with many of you in months; with most of you, perhaps even longer.
So I hope that I'll be able to once again. :)

(something something about a phoenix cliche)

Many thanks to those who have stuck with me, and who still pay attention to what I do.
Here's hoping I can live up to your expectations again.

Daniel

  • Mood: Hope
  • Listening to: Bent Knee - Shiny Eyed Babies

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Dan Kuburoglu
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Life's greatest miracle is the miracle of life. (Said it when I was 13, has been my... uh... "saying"... ever since. Even I'm not sure what meaning it holds now...)

A die hard Dream Theater fan, although I'll try to remain as a "fan" and not a "fanboy" as much as possible.

I write poetry, stories, reviews...

An experimentalist (is that even a word?) when it comes to form and structure of poetry. Concrete (shaped) poetry is my specialty though. I'll try out new fusions, and am not scared to try anything down to syllable, letter or word management.
I am, however, still trying to keep a high level of emotion and philosophy in my poems, and can end up becoming a little bit too much of a perfectionist. (So much so that I'll send out a poem as soon as it's "perfect" without even going through it to try improving for a second draft... *sigh*)


I was featured on DLD by caybeach Dream Theater Stamp by KelpyKrad:iconhonoredddplz::iconhonoredddplz2:
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Nichrysalis Featured By Owner 6 hours ago  Hobbyist Writer
:party: Have a great hatch-day! (you were hatched right?)
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Brother... We miss you...
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Shuriken95 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I have occasionally tried to pop in, but the last few times I did so, the LRT wasn't on. Maybe I'll try again this week. :)
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MistressMissingno Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
Many thanks for the watch
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Shuriken95 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome.

And thank YOU for providing the great content. :)
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No problem I have a blast making them
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Thank you very much for the watch! I hope you like what you find. :huggle:

Also, is Coffee your dog? He or she is absolutely gorgeous! (I feel I should warn you now, get me started on animals and I'll turn into an "aww so cute" mess. ;))
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Shuriken95 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :D

And yeah, Coffee was our dog, but we lost her a while back. She was a great inspiration for me though, so I wanted to keep her close by. :) We do have another dog called Archie though, and he's every bit as nutty as she was. :)


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camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I'm so sorry for your loss. :heart:

Kisses to your Archie, though!
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Thanks :)
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